Whoooo~! :3 First comic page I did successfully...>> Honestly, please give me advice on how to do better? I made all the pretty tones with Manga Studio Debut 4.0 I'm only posting the first page here, 'cause it kinda gets adult in later pages. ^^U lol
edit: I took some critique advice and edited it. Hopefully it looks better now.
Actually, the chances of Minru being gay are declining majorly...mostly because of his relationship with his master. XD And Cinaed, as far as I can tell, is straight. He was married to a woman, once upon a time.
Honestly, though, this story is one of the hardest I've dealt with in trying to add romance to it. XD The characters are refusing to follow my orders...and I'm already considering rewriting a later scene so I don't have to draw oogy parts. XD
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I can already see the homosexuality oozing out of it. They are going to make out in the next panel Aren't They?!?!?!
Just kidding!!
Looks good for a beginning. Not much detail, but then it really doesn't need it.
Honestly, though, this story is one of the hardest I've dealt with in trying to add romance to it. XD The characters are refusing to follow my orders...and I'm already considering rewriting a later scene so I don't have to draw oogy parts. XD
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