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Whoooo~! :3 First comic page I did successfully...>> Honestly, please give me advice on how to do better? I made all the pretty tones with Manga Studio Debut 4.0 I'm only posting the first page here, 'cause it kinda gets adult in later pages. ^^U lol

edit: I took some critique advice and edited it. Hopefully it looks better now.

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Much luv for this

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"This isn't a lobster, it's a skinny crab!"
:iconmahoumakai:
Heh, like it? I'm hoping that I don't abandon this...

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GAY!!!
I can already see the homosexuality oozing out of it. They are going to make out in the next panel Aren't They?!?!?!

Just kidding!! :P

Looks good for a beginning. Not much detail, but then it really doesn't need it.
:iconmahoumakai:
Actually, the chances of Minru being gay are declining majorly...mostly because of his relationship with his master. XD And Cinaed, as far as I can tell, is straight. He was married to a woman, once upon a time.

Honestly, though, this story is one of the hardest I've dealt with in trying to add romance to it. XD The characters are refusing to follow my orders...and I'm already considering rewriting a later scene so I don't have to draw oogy parts. XD

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